Sunday, December 19, 2010

Revolutionary

This has gone through quite a many edits and permutations.  I can either stay with what I challenged myself to do, or water it down for less abstraction.  I have chosen the former.  So, it's very abstract (there may be a better art term) but hey, read it out loud.


Revolutionary


Auras soared
Lewd.  A crystal
Or a sword
Ludicrous, still
It would not stop beating

It's saluting merits
In difference
It's a looting mare, it's
Indifference
At keeping others warm

Solemn pyre
Impositions
Saw l'empire
In position
Showing sight the blind
Pro-life proliferation
Hand to brow in kind

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