I write poems to pass the time, and sometimes it turns out well. Updates most weeks, usually on Tuesday. 2011 was a year for narrative works, generally using standard poetic tools. 2012 will be focused on homophonic and backwards/forwards pieces.
Tuesday, March 26, 2013
Roller Coaster
This is the third poem in a row with summer on my mind. Homophones.
Roller Coaster
Anticipation
And it's a patient
Standing teen
Stand in teams
Her next hug?
Harness, snugged
Instill calm! Oddities
In steel commodities
Suspended
Upended
Water blasts
What a blast!
Ever the notion of
Every motion of
Racing too quickly
Raising to quickly
Heightened alarm
Height and all arms
Wrecked if I'd
Start to break
Rectified,
Starts to brake
Coming to a rest
Calming too impressed
Riders getting off
Already back in line
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describe the rush of adreline when riding a roller coaster. Even if you know whats coming you can't stop the rush. what a blast
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