lines are homophonic or simple rhyming, it might need a little polish, but for now I like it.
The Celebrated One
I almost said hello
(our eyes did not meet)
I almost sat hollow
Lockets at your feet
Where with all the awed
Gathered in a heap
Wherewithal, the odd
Vanity we keep
Fallen higher
Unchecked gyres
Fall in, "Hi," or
Well, not quite
While passing on the street
I almost said hello,
But our eyes did not meet
1 comment:
its reminder of yopour shyness.I know how you feel. I walkk the sameits beautiful
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