Tuesday, October 9, 2012

A Blustery Autumn Day

I decided to do a few shorter bw/fw stanzas instead of a single longer one.  then I ended with a few free lines to end the spell.  nothing deep this week.

A Blustery Autumn Day

Gales spiraling leaves
Drafting over dew
Drafty leaves
Spiraling gales

Outpouring of clouds darkened
Then to hail
A tapping Morse code
More tapping, a hail
To then-darkened clouds
Of pouring out

Gently stepping
Puddles sloshing
I caught a girl by surprise
Shared umbrellas
Umbrellas shared
Surprise by girl, a caught eye
Sloshing puddles
Stepping gently

The storm passed
We remained, huddled
With the smell of clarity

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

great desciption of a windy fall day.love the hail.