I decided to do a few shorter bw/fw stanzas instead of a single longer one. then I ended with a few free lines to end the spell. nothing deep this week.
A Blustery Autumn Day
A Blustery Autumn Day
Gales
spiraling leaves
Drafting
over dew
(do-over)
Drafty
leaves
Spiraling
gales
Outpouring
of clouds darkened
Then
to hail
A
tapping Morse code
More
tapping, a hail
To
then-darkened clouds
Of
pouring out
Hunkering
Gently
stepping
Puddles
sloshing
I
caught a girl by surprise
Shared
umbrellas
Intimated
Umbrellas
shared
Surprise
by girl, a caught eye
Sloshing
puddles
Stepping
gently
Hunkering
The
storm passed
We
remained, huddled
With
the smell of clarity
1 comment:
great desciption of a windy fall day.love the hail.
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