I write poems to pass the time, and sometimes it turns out well. Updates most weeks, usually on Tuesday. 2011 was a year for narrative works, generally using standard poetic tools. 2012 will be focused on homophonic and backwards/forwards pieces.
Tuesday, October 23, 2012
Car and Raindrops
I call this style "word collage," though if anyone knows the actual term, let me know. The last time I did something like this was in 2010 (http://poemsbygreg.blogspot.com/2010/12/smoldered.html) Previously I have used this style for confusion and complexity, but today's instead focuses on shaping. .
I wanted to make it longer, but there isn't much to say about falling rain.
Car and Raindrops
la gashing the
sp ing immead air
sh iacy clean
o
f
sl id in g tire's peace
out bu
of tur len
control! ce
gutters
e f u
s n n
guard rails o e l
r l e
d
et
te er
on from
the the
ed
g cloud
e
t t
o o
fall fa
l
is to l
s
c a is to return
r h
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